Okay, so I've tried to post this thing like a hundred times and for some reason, blogger isn't so happy with formatting, so I'm trying one last time. This piece was from a writing exercise we did where you had describe a scene out a window without using the word "the" and in three sentences. Here's what I came up with:Brazen blusters follow currents directed by large buildings filled with thousands of untold stories..my eyes can only endure windy torrents behind glacial flows of glass. Here I pay my final respects to summer, an homage to billowed clouds and sunscreen sense. Autumnal colors flourish in response to waning warmth and I look forward to vernal victory over the coming snow.
I dunno, I think my use of an ellipsis is a bit of a cheat and it seems pretty rushed on my part. But I'm relatively happy with it considering the amount of time we had to work on it (like five minutes).
1 comment:
That's a good exercise. I like it. :)
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